Spring has ended
this one
never returns
Autumn was painful
so much letting go
leaf by leaf
love shed
leaving me barren
Now an endless winter
a snowscaped
colorless misery
outside my window
- the last Juliet!
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ReplyDeleteshukriya Farrah
DeleteThat was sad but so beautifully said. The good bit though, is that spring follows winter, without fail.
ReplyDeleteYes kind of
DeleteThat’s how life is you let go but hold on to memories. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteGracias Keerthi
DeleteBeautifully penned down... there is a true lyrical majesty in this post.
ReplyDeleteThanks @Roshan
DeleteThere's so much depth to your words. I especially liked these lines: so much letting go
ReplyDeleteleaf by leaf
love shed
leaving me barren
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Loving too much does that to us. Have been there.
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But, the winter too shall end and the world will change its colour. It's what I remind myself each time, that nothing is permanent.
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Deletesuch longing in your words. Fabulous poetry.
ReplyDeleteYes Raklakshmi thats the emotion longing
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