tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.comments2023-12-29T17:55:17.564+05:30Second thoughts First...Pooja Priyamvadahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comBlogger2037125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-16246532740675768612022-08-23T13:52:26.718+05:302022-08-23T13:52:26.718+05:30Shayad kayi aur sadiyanShayad kayi aur sadiyanPooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-91940488966425018242021-09-14T10:17:16.370+05:302021-09-14T10:17:16.370+05:30Thanks NehaThanks NehaPooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-37452238923202606732021-09-14T10:17:00.475+05:302021-09-14T10:17:00.475+05:30Thanks Chinmayee glad you liked itThanks Chinmayee glad you liked itPooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-74777460621879425292021-09-14T01:35:34.350+05:302021-09-14T01:35:34.350+05:30I read it then re-read it. I guess the reason is o...I read it then re-read it. I guess the reason is obvious. It is beautifully composed. It takes to me to another place in my imagination but your last lines took it somewhere else. I am amazed the way the this comes out at the end. Great...Neha Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11169779541636085270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-59227759596393471492021-09-11T13:07:08.770+05:302021-09-11T13:07:08.770+05:30Wow! Simply loved the way you have layered this po...Wow! Simply loved the way you have layered this poem. Its so relatable and yet so fresh and different. Loved it! Mayura Amarkanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03867445018303038614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-82742224847307341212021-09-11T11:18:40.442+05:302021-09-11T11:18:40.442+05:30Wow!Each scar, each mark, has a tale to tell
Thi...Wow!Each scar, each mark, has a tale to tell <br /><br />This line says alot! But yes, The twist at the end brought a smile to my face. It pushed me to read the whole again, I literally found myself surround in the ambience of relaxing salon! Wonderfully weaved!Archana Srivastavahttps://archusblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-27948712105439968072021-09-11T08:20:43.828+05:302021-09-11T08:20:43.828+05:30Wow! That was quite an unexpected twist in the end...Wow! That was quite an unexpected twist in the end. I imagined this poem to be about something else but the end changed the entire meaning of it. That's the beauty of this poem....enjoyed reading it, Pooja ji Janaki/Ishaan Saihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03789688313013383163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-41594024948313414372021-09-10T19:19:45.789+05:302021-09-10T19:19:45.789+05:30A very nuanced , balanced and brilliantly composed...A very nuanced , balanced and brilliantly composed poem from you. Each line is an imagery and so well portrayed! The poem depicts so many layers in it and certainly the twist at the end just blew me away! Hats off Pooja. Loved it .Chinmayee Gayatree Sahuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01234379023132816124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-70291187746571912652021-09-10T19:02:23.076+05:302021-09-10T19:02:23.076+05:30Thanks that you liked the twist!Thanks that you liked the twist!Pooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-90455104610410418572021-09-10T18:59:28.178+05:302021-09-10T18:59:28.178+05:30Oh, how I miss the good pre-pandemoc spa session. ...Oh, how I miss the good pre-pandemoc spa session. :D<br />Jokes aside, I loved the twist the denouement brought along. <br />I had quite expected it to run a romantic course, but man, isn't life (and poetry) full of surprises.<br />Cleverly crafted indeed! Prihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01023126998314268275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-61970792459721076062021-09-10T18:45:38.274+05:302021-09-10T18:45:38.274+05:30Thanks for acknowledging the uniquenessThanks for acknowledging the uniquenessPooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-24723033393672463272021-09-10T18:45:20.978+05:302021-09-10T18:45:20.978+05:30Thanks Pragnya yes it has become even more special...Thanks Pragnya yes it has become even more special nowPooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-51552142699666169032021-09-10T18:44:58.737+05:302021-09-10T18:44:58.737+05:30Glad you were able to connect GowriGlad you were able to connect GowriPooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-36204470887803329542021-09-10T18:44:32.714+05:302021-09-10T18:44:32.714+05:30Thanks MithleshThanks MithleshPooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-78445939818613773002021-09-10T18:44:18.048+05:302021-09-10T18:44:18.048+05:30Thank you ShaliniThank you ShaliniPooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-27462267074841480162021-09-10T14:38:22.495+05:302021-09-10T14:38:22.495+05:30Fab piece, Pooja! Salon experience has ceased than...Fab piece, Pooja! Salon experience has ceased thanks to pandemic but reading your poems made me relish the mood uplift I used to get and beauty of small talks with strangers. Loved this. Pragnyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10393025976926606357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-84025093573762747472021-09-10T13:30:43.502+05:302021-09-10T13:30:43.502+05:30Loved the unique take of the poems.The reveal in t...Loved the unique take of the poems.The reveal in the end was so good.I am able to connect with the thought process of the poem.So beautiful gowrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08386799010148336505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-87536580557535545552021-09-10T04:11:03.610+05:302021-09-10T04:11:03.610+05:30Loved this poem and the twist at the end. This is ...Loved this poem and the twist at the end. This is an awesome piece pf poetry or I must say a different yet unique take on this theme.Abha Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10901388445485661274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-29244367744769318582021-09-10T04:00:55.143+05:302021-09-10T04:00:55.143+05:30Loved this poem and the twist at the end. This is ...Loved this poem and the twist at the end. This is an awesome piece of poetry. A different yet unique take on this theme I must say. Abha Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10901388445485661274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-25411056848915442642021-09-09T22:38:45.980+05:302021-09-09T22:38:45.980+05:30Great expression of thoughts in beautiful words wi...Great expression of thoughts in beautiful words with an decisive twist which suddenly changes the nature of an erotic composition into an empathetic one. Nice to read this. Mithlesh Kumar Jhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15445332952718097658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-89494681655951389542021-09-09T22:36:35.633+05:302021-09-09T22:36:35.633+05:30The twist was what made the difference….it made th...The twist was what made the difference….it made the piece extraordinaryShalinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12582293214774330810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-80465619263872101872021-09-09T19:36:51.706+05:302021-09-09T19:36:51.706+05:30Glad you liked it, thanksGlad you liked it, thanksPooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-86801362668698791792021-09-09T19:36:32.053+05:302021-09-09T19:36:32.053+05:30Indeed, you are right, thanksIndeed, you are right, thanksPooja Priyamvadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01276632648811903859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-1266433064529676292021-09-09T19:29:23.479+05:302021-09-09T19:29:23.479+05:30Loved your imaginary, the twist at the end, totall...Loved your imaginary, the twist at the end, totally unpredictable. Beautiful!Ramya Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02249812874788737974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8320668142362343092.post-71951404368170056542021-09-09T18:26:59.048+05:302021-09-09T18:26:59.048+05:30Wow. That is a beautiful poem filled with empathy ...Wow. That is a beautiful poem filled with empathy the best part is most of such meetings are like they meet for the very first time.sivaranjinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14781402895010423360noreply@blogger.com